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Sibling Seduction Reviews
Author: LordYoni
Date: 2010
ADRIFT 3.9
Reviewed by A. Bomire
Game Play
This game is a basic "treasure hunt". There are several objects that you need to
find, located throughout the home. Once you do, you bring them back to the room
your sister is in and use them in an appropriate manner.
Sex
Your sister is remarkably accepting of your advances, if you have satisfied her
romantic desires, of course. The sexual scenes are nothing special. They aren't
bad; they just aren't particularly well written, either.
Technical
The game has no major faults, although there are quite a few minor ones.
Misspellings and grammatical errors abound. Your sexual actions with your sister
are dependent upon you finding all of the "treasure items" (i.e., items that
will get your sister into a romantic mood), but there is no indication of what
they are or when you are missing one - other than your sister rejecting your
advances.
Final Thoughts
This game is a classic first game, with the typical signs of a first-time
author: misspellings, grammar errors, and simplistic plot. Hopefully, LordYoni
can take the lessons learned from authoring this game and come back again with a
better offering.
Reviewed by Rip_CPU
Concept
A basic concept. Guy wants to sleep with his sister. Hardly unfamiliar territory
for AIF games, and while it's not everyone's cup of tea it isn't too shocking or
taboo. The execution of the concept is very flawed, I'm afraid. More on that
later.
Game Play
The puzzles of the game are fairly old school AIF type puzzles, wherein you have
to find a variety of different objects and them simply use them one at a time.
For the most part it's uncomplicated, although some objects may be harder to
find than others.
Technical
There are no game breaking bugs, although there are quite a few bugs here and
there. Objects or body parts may need to be referred to by a different phrase
than as described, that sort of thing. But more glaring than the bugs are the
writing and grammatical errors all over the place. Spelling, punctuational,
capitalization, spacing... there are many of these errors in the INTRODUCTION
alone. It makes the game feel very sloppy.
Sex
Terrible. Not because of the incest angle, but because we have no idea WHY the
unnamed PC decides to just now go after his little sister. The sister isn't
particularly interesting in any special way, and it wasn't as if she was in a
particularly arousing situation when we first meet her (ie, just stepping out of
the shower in only a towel). She has all the personality of a piece of
cardboard, with a few cliches about girls enjoying chocolate and fireplaces and
candles tacked on. This makes the sex dull and uninteresting, and given that
this game is only focused upon the sex...
Final Thoughts
Poor writing and an absolute lack of characterization makes this the weakest of
all the entries this year. There is simply nothing in this game that is unique
or interesting, from the scenario to the puzzles to the characters.
Reviewed by Purple Dragon
Game Play
The game play here is a classic treasure hunt. Find the right items, do the
right things with them, and the sex is unlocked. It would be nice if there was
some indication of exactly what you needed to find to unlock the full scene. If
you're missing an object you can get part of the way through it (which I like
better than having to get everything first, it just makes more sense to me this
way) but then you hit a wall. While it wouldn't be the easiest thing to
implement, a hint at that point as to what you are missing would be nice.
Technically
There are quite a few typos, etc in the game, which shows just how important
beta testers can be. The game is fairly simple, but there are really only a
couple of other larger problems, and none of them are game-killing. My biggest
gripe is that “touch” and “rub” when related to bodyparts are not always treated
as synonyms, which is annoying, but not a particularly big deal once you are
aware of the fact.
Sex
The sex in the game was pretty decent. Not outstanding, but it certainly had its
moments. As long as you have all those objects I mentioned above before you
started it allows you to progress through the scene at your own pace.
Of course, there are the questions of why the PC is so interested in his sister,
and why she is so accepting of his advances, but for the moment I willing to
chalk the answers to those up to, “because it's an AIF game, dammit!” and leave
it at that.
Final Thoughts
The subject matter (the sexual interest being your underage sister) will
obviously not appeal to everyone. However, if nothing else, this game shows us
that all games dealing with this subject matter need not be unmitigated
disasters as one past, very prolific, very bad author did his darnedest to prove
to us.
Most of the problems that you see with this game are pretty typical of
first-time authors, and since this was a first-time author, that's not terribly
surprising. Now that he has gotten his feet wet I'm looking forward to his next
attempt.
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