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Author: Inkybus
Date: 2006
TADS


What does AIF stand for? Adult Interactive Fiction. If you likely to be offended by games with sexual content, you are advised not
to open these files.


Reviewed by Anonymous
Overview: You’re in a high school classroom, in detention with your girlfriend, being supervised by one of your teachers. Can you steal a fuck, even in this most unlikely situation?~

What works: The great strength of this game is in the very unlikeliness of its premise. The entire setup is completely impossible. But for players willing to suspend their disbelief (and pretty much that means anyone who plays AIF), it makes for a great sexy fantasy: hiking up your girlfriend’s skirt and doing her right in the classroom with anyone likely to walk in on you at any minute. It’s so smutty, I just love it. Inkybus’ fairly terse but vivid writing style in his sex scene supports this nicely and as a result, the sex is very hot.

What doesn’t: There are some technical oddities about the game, and it can be fairly rigid in parts. For instance, to perform anal sex with your girlfriend, her ass must be lubricated. But there’s only one roundabout way to accomplish this, even after you find the lubricant. Also, the sex scene could have used a little more variety (we’re given only two sexual positions, but with the amount of furniture in the classroom, others could have been possible). Finally, the characters are a bit flatter than those in some of the other games, but are certainly adequate for a mini-comp.

Concept/Writing: 3rd
Characters: 3rd
Technical: 4th
Hotness: 2nd
Enjoyment: 4th
 


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